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Study Group 39 |
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| David Halgrimson | Great subject and the ball in the air works well. I also tend to like the person in the background, it adds some tension. I might crop a little off the top and even less off the bottom. The bright area my be a little too bright. |
| Mohammed Arfan Asif | Good timing and action captured here. I would prefer you correct the slight vertical tilt using the background verticals as a reference. Also slightly deepening the background would help the viewer to first travel to the main element. I like it very much and good luck for your upcoming thematic exhibition. |
| Jerry Hug | The photo really lends itself to many uses with a circus theme. You may consider cropping down a little from the top to take away some of the negative space in the upper right corner. How far? Your call. |
| Paul Hoffman |
What a well seen image and you have timed it well with the ball’s and
the man in the background. Personally I would have liked the man
silently more separated from the clown. But the expression and placement
of the clown is brilliant and I love the image. |
| Kit Snider | |
| Roc Godec | Nice shot. I like the contrast but would prefer silhouette more to the right that wouldn't cover clown's hands – but this is just a minor detail. |
| Jim Baker | This image should work very well for your upcoming show, Kim. I like the figure of the ringmaster in silhouette. I also like the action presented by the juggling but I would have adjusted my viewpoint slightly to the right to eliminate the dark line running through the clown’s face. |
| Member Bio | ||
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Kit Snyder - Biography Education Ohio State University - Palm Beach Photographic Center - Studied Nature Photography with John and Barbara Gerlach and John Shaw - Jack Wild - Master Photographer Gallery - 20 years with Rubiner Gallery of Royal Oak, Michigan SHOWS AND AWARDS - Detroit Audubon Society - Detroit Society of Women Painters Award and One Man Show - Scarab Club of Detroit - Birmingham-Bloomfield Art Association - Bird Talk Magazine - Loxahatchee Wildlife Refuge 2008-2009-2010 - Florida Camera Club Council 2005 through 2010 - Florida Camera Club Council 2005 through 2010 - Armory Art Center of the Palm Beaches 2009 - Bonnet House - 2009 - Cornell Museum - 2010 - Delray Beach Library one man Show - 2009 - Lighthouse Artcenter Museum 2010 - Artists Haven International Photography Competition - First Prize - 2010 My father gave me his
childhood bellows type Kodak camera when I was ten
years old. Many hours were spent in my backyard
photographing throughout the seasons. The
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