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Sisi Ho |
This is a perfect postcard shot. I wish I were there. |
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John Gilkerson |
This image certainly captures the nature of the location. Timing the boat so that it is clear of the viewpoint was essential. A little straightening , I tried 1 degree, helps. I also removed the end of another structure just above the foreground boats. |
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Diane Bovencamp |
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Anu Nadimpalli |
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nice tranquil scene. I think you can crop the bottom close to the boats
in the foreground. And maybe you can bring out some more tones in the
vegetation, just to make it a little more interesting. Was this taken
in Fall? Fall colors can be simply spectacular in Kyoto. |
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Paul Roth |
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think this is one of your better images Diane. I have a couple of minor
comments that may improve the photo. I would lighten the shadow detail,
and straighten the far side of t he shore a little. I agree it is being
picky, but I believe it would enhance the image. Its unfortunate you
don't have any detail in the sky. |
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Carl Soerens |
A pleasant scene providing us a look into the community. I suggest cropping off the bright sky. |
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Diane Bovenkamp Bio | |
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Diane Bovenkamp - Biography Since obtaining my first camera when I was seven years old, I have been fascinated with photography. Presently, I’m on the Board of Directors of the Baltimore Camera Club, a club member of PSA, and enjoy participating in the print, digital and slide competitions, program nights, and seminars from visiting professionals. I joined PSA as an individual in 2008 to further develop my technique and personal style and to network with international photographers. The 2009 PSA International Exhibition is my first foray into PSA competitions. I look forward to learning more about the vision and techniques of monochrome photography from the other photographers in this group. |
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