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Study Group 29
Ellen Beller










Ellen Beller
Judy Burr
Karen Harris
Wayne Johnson
Jim Weidenfeller
Bob Wills
Mark De May
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"Sensitive plants in paradise"

April Image

How I did it -

I took this picture in Hawaii when i was there in November. This is a really cool plant that closes up when you touch the leaves. I used to have one, but it is sensitive (not just to the touch) so it was difficult to keep. I took this picture quickly when we were walking along a trail, so i didn't get a chance to set up much. I opened the image in lightroom and adjusted the colors so that they were bright. I then opened it in elements and cropped the image. I then selected a rectangle inside the image. Using the lasso tool, i added the leaf on the outside. I then put a small stroke around the selected area using the pink that is in the flower. I then blackened the rest of the image so that that leaf popped out of the image.


COMMENTS:

Judy Burr

Your description is very helpful as well as interesting. It is hard to shoot "on the run" and you did well. The texture in the pink flower is nice and I like the leaf outside the frame. I find the berry on the left being cut off bothersome and have been told that dead leaves detracts from an image, but know from experience that it is hard to find a "perfect" plant! I would like to see it cropped closer to the flower which is the heart of the picture.

Mark De May

Karen Harris

What an interesting flower. I think the flower itself looks a bit over exposed. I also might like it better if it was cropped in a bit more so the picture is more about the flower.

Wayne Johnson

I like the different techniques that you use to add something to the image. This image would work better if you cropped off the bottom so that the leaf sticking out would draw your attention more. What I learned from my friend, isolate and simplify. This image would be great if you were able to isolate the flower and leaf. I would also adjust the white balance to make it cooler, With the image warmer it makes the leaves look like they are sick.

Jim Weidenfeller

I like the blackened edge with the leaf hanging over the edge. I guess I am not sure where the focal point was as I thought the flower was the subject. But it is not as sharp as I would expect. The red fruit on the left side seems to be more in focus.

Bob Wills

I think that you have a winner with this photo. Your light is good and the subject is in sharp focus. It looks slightly oversaturated on my monitor. The flower is placed on a good power point. I had to look up the sensitive plant, also called sleeping grass. I’ve never seen it in bloom before. Nice job.


Member Bio
Ellen Beller - Biography

I am currently a student at Michigan Technological University in Houghton, MI. I am majoring in Wildlife Ecology and Management with a minor in Environmental Science.  I grew up in Idaho Falls, ID and the surrounding areas. Since I was young, I was exposed to the outdoors through camping, hiking, skiing and white water rafting. Being in nature drew me to photography. I love the outdoors and I wanted to capture what I saw in photographs. I use a Nikon D50, but I’m still learning all the different settings that I can use.


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