A very dynamic photo, which—as you said—must look much better with a higher resolution of the vapor trails. You captured a lot of detail in a fast moving object, which is impressive. If you crop some of the sky on the right side and on the top of the image, you could move the plane from the center of the image to the upper right, giving it more room "to fly" and making it perhaps even more dynamic.

My name is Steve Serpa and this is my first Study Group with PSA. As far as my photography goes I just graduated this past June with a certificate from the oldest Photography school in the country, the New York Institute of Photography, founded in 1910. It was a long hard road but was surely worth the effort.

Also, for the pass three seasons I’ve been a member of the Photographic Society of Rhode Island. Many of our members have been shooting for a long time and it’s been real privilege learning from them with their vast knowledge and experience; they are very willing to share both advice and technique and for this I thank them.

I’m looking forward to working with all the members of this group because I feel it will be a great learning experience for me and I hope I too can contribute to your knowledge as well.