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| Jim Hawkins | You did a nice job of
cropping the original and then selectively enhancing certain photo
elements while thoughtfully removing others. For me that is
the very essence of creativity. The PSA definition of
"Creativity" as "Altered Reality" is all wet on several grounds.
I have never tried to raise an issue about it because I am not able to
offer a better alternative. I like your house. |
| Claudia Peterson | In
my Club, this would be considered a Pictorial. Having said that, I
do think the treatment is perfect for this image and improves it
tremendously. I really enjoy the image and appreciate the lovely
flowers and old rock building. |
| Elli Kraizberg |
Very
gentle treatment which emerges as a beautiful image.
It is hard to judge the Degree of improvement due to
the very small size of the original photo.
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| Ian Ledgard |
You
don't just have to use outrageous techniques to be
creative as you have proved with this very subtle
manipulation. The effect is very pleasing and
certainly to my mind an improvement on the original.
Do you have any other shots where the building is
less dominant than in this composition where the
building is I find just a little overpowering. |
| Frank Crommelin | I
like the image and what you have done with it, it is definitely an
improvement, it has increased the sharpness considerable. The only
thing I would change is to clone out the corrugated metal in the
window to look more like the door opening. This would make a great
calendar picture it has a peaceful another time and place look. |
| Andrés Canepa |
I
like your new frame, moving the subject to the right
(to the crash point), the place is amazing and the
improvements correct, may be I not toning down the
clouds. I am agree with you about in this times it
is not exactly creative. I this cases I encourage
you to make a HDR image, shoot tree images with -2EV
0EV +2EV, and joint in Photomatix. |
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Nancy Parker - Biography I am a retired university professor. I currently volunteer one day a week in research at the Missouri Botanical Garden on “The Flora of Missouri” project. I have taken pictures casually since I got my first Brownie Hawkeye camera when I was about 12. I got my first 35 mm camera, a Canon AE1, about 40 years ago. I shot kids, grandkids, and mostly nature for years and was “official” field and lab photographer for a large botany group at the university, shooting slides. I joined the St. Louis Camera Club in 2002 and PSA in 2006. Within the past five years I have discovered Photoshop and, continuing my march through the Canon EOS series, moved to digital with the 30D. I still like to shoot nature but I now shoot a variety of subjects and LOVE playing in Photoshop, although I am still a novice. |
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