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Creative Study Group 24 |
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| Jim's post-comment space | June 23rd -- Thank you all so much
for your comments on this piece. Each of you has given me something
to notice or think about in my future development of the image. I
can't incorporate every idea (like changing the head in the ball)
but, using your feedback, I will modify the picture before I try it
in competition. After posting it here in Group 24 I showed it as a
print at club. It took First Place in Creative Prints and generated
a lot of interest. It will be a few weeks before I find out how it
fares at the Council level. |
| Frank Crommelin | I admire the work that went into
making this image and your extensive use of programs other than
Photoshop. It is well done and the creative effects all work well
together. I would like to see this done with some kind of a Wizard
or Rose Bud in the globe, My only suggestion would have been to put
Five dollars in some homeless mans cup and take his picture instead
of yourself, It's going to be hard to explain when one of your Grand
children takes this to school for show and tell |
| Elli Kraizberg |
This is
definitely your boldest piece, and the most creative
and artistic one and that is why I like it very
much. This Escher type image is almost perfect
technically – just few smoothing of the outlines
such as right side of the hand are needed. You
emphasize the description of the creation of the
ball but to me the uniqueness of this piece is the
face. |
| Ian Ledgard | I just read a jokey e-mail which
said 'you know you are getting older when the face in the mirror
when your shaving looks like you Dad!' Perhaps that was what
you were trying to achieve? A lot of work involved but a very
impressive result and all form a little compact camera. You mention
a lot of software which is unknown to me and I wonder if I could
cope with much more than CS3 and my BuZZ plug in. Good bit of
work. |
| Nancy Parker |
Great job! It is a very imaginative use of a variety of techniques
to produce an image with real impact. What amazes me most is your
mastery of the variety of techniques required to produce the image
and how you had any idea what to use to produce this result. I did
think that it was a little too bright in the upper left hand
corner. It tended to draw my eye and that brightness continuing
into the crystal ball was also somewhat distracting. |
| Stephan Funke | Everything is extremely well done
in this exercise, but as Jim asks us:"....what you think...?" I
think it is an image which does not please me and it does not convey
any message to me. Or said in an other way: I am looking for beauty
and harmony in imaging and this example does not support that. A
very personal approach, I know.......... |
| Andrés Canepa | Simply extraordinary, full of
creativity, you create something absolutely new (and very very good)
from two good shot, it is CREATIVITY!!!. You named a lot of different program that make me feel small because I only use the Photoshop. Congratulation on this great work, superb!!. When you present this work in an exhibition, retouch the white little line at the bottom of the ball and in the bottom-right of the hand to be the image perfect. |
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Jim Hawkins - Biography I am a retired Professor who lives in San Jose California. Photography has been part of my life since I was 12. I can remember taking pictures as a kid from a DC-3 airplane and also shooting flood waters from a moving train traveling through the Midwest. At 21 I moved up to a 35mm camera and Kodachrome slides. Some of the slides taken back then have placed in more recent competitions. I stayed with the 35mm format throughout my academic years (though I did shoot Polaroid snapshots as well). Then, just before my retirement in 1996, I got a Kodak DC-50 digital camera, a Microtek flatbed scanner, and Photoshop version 3.0.5. Thus, I was an "early adopter" of digital imaging. Recently I stopped shooting slide film altogether, and while I continue to show prints, digital imaging has become my focus. "My Halloween Alter Ego" is a scanner image of myself (appropriately edited in Photoshop ;-). |
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