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Bob Yelle











 
Marti Buckely
Dianne Glick
Jo-Ann Devine
Nancy Brown
Joe Zaia
Bob Yelle
Larry Hegstad
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View From a Balcony - Jan 2012

How I Did It

I have to start out by telling you what I didn't do to this image, and that is crop it.  What you see is right out of the box.  We were sitting on a balcony having a lunch and at the same time were admiring the view below.  As you can guess, we were pretty high up a hillside.  I took some good shots toward the groung, but then looked up and saw this basket of flowers flowing down from the terrace above us.  So, I started concentrating on shooting it.  It was later in the afternoon and the sun was casting a golden glow on the sides of the buildings.  The flowers and their basket were almost right in front of me.  I  really didn't need to do too much to the flowers nor the basket.  Just applied a little levels and a slight curve to highlight them slightly.  Then I used Topaz adjust to fine tune them.  Hope you like this offering!


COMMENTS:

 

Marti Buckely


In this image, the brightest parts are of the building and it distracts me from the hanging flowers.  I'd be curious as to what settings were used for this image.  It seems that a lower Fstop (say wide open) would have blurred out the building more allowing the flowers to take center stage.  It's pretty but not a strong shot.  Sorry Bob - liked your last couple of offerings better.

 

 

Dianne Glick

 

The colors in this image are particularly wonderful together.  I read your comments about cropping and then tried to figure out where I would crop - difficult choices.  My eye does wander to the bright yellow - perhaps you could tone that down a bit and bring the eye more to the flowers.  I think it would be a difficult shot for me to edit - I'm sure Marti will have some suggestions.  Where were you? Italy, Greece??

Jo-Ann Devine

 

Nice subject matter.  Photo is a bit too bright or over exposed. The upper left hand corner is distracting. The flower pot, and leaves are nice and sharp.

 

Nancy Brown

Lovely light, cascading flowers and use of Adjust.  And a really nice color palette of soft gold, orange and fushia!  I would just darken the corners a bit to  keep the eyes on the flowers.  And have you tried flipping it?
 
Joe Zaia

 

Bob, I would liked to have been at your warm, relaxing and romantic setting. I am sure you have wonderful memories of this place and that the original cascade of flowers was beautiful, but I hope you can forgive me if I do not see what you see in this photo. It appears to me that the warm afternoon light did not do justice to the flowers and leaves. Apart from the harsh light, the background is distracting and I could not find a focal point for my eye to rest on. As I said, I do not see what you see in this picture, but what you see is really what counts.

 

Larry Hegstad
 

A very pleasing image and I can well understand why you were attracted to the scene.  The textures and lines in the gate are lovely and for this reason, my one suggestion would be to show a bit more of the gate.  
 

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