Study Group 22
Dianne Glick

Marti Buckely	The placement of the tree is good.  I feel there is too much white in the upper right corner.  It takes up about 1/4 of the image.  I tried bringing into Camera RAW and sliding the Recovery slider all the way right, saved it, closed it and then opened it in Camera RAW again.  Giving it a little more Recovery helped bring in some details to the sky.  Keep at it.  You are getting better and better at your composition.
Jo-Ann Devine	Tree and branches are sharp. The little red leaves or berries add to the photo with the white snow in the background.  I think the right side of the photo could be cropped a bit.
Nancy Brown	Nicely done.  A most interesting tree with the geyser "blast", and excellent detail of the little branches with frost.  Good idea with the berries, but you might try a slightly brighter red to make them more visible.
Joe Zaia	Yes, even in Florida I can feel the chill of your “Snowghost” tree. Excellent idea to give the berries more color, or else it would look like a monochrome picture. You did well, but perhaps you could give it more life with a Curves treatment and darkening the black tones.
Bob Yelle	Conceptually, I like what you tried to do to capture this scene.  In my opinion, you came very close.  I like the small tree and the geyser on the right side.  It emphasizes the foggy affect of the image.  I like how you used the clone tool to add color to the berries.  I think you may have an image that you could use for a Christmas card next year.  I'd like to mention a couple of things.  In my opinion, there is too much white space in the upper right corner of the pic.  I'm thinking that a little crop (not enough to take out the geyser and tree entirely) ould help downplay the white space.  Also, it appears to me that the foreground tree trunk is a little underexposed.  Good effort.
Larry Hegstad	The adjustments applied to the original image are well done and add more "punch" to the image.  In my opinion, the image would be stronger if it isolated a single berry and/or branch.  A 70 - 200 mm lens would be ideal for the effect.
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