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Title - Should This Be in the MOMA? (June)

How I did it - This is a collage of rusted junk car abstracts. All photos were pretty close to the originals from the camera, but I did increase the saturation and cropped them. I then placed them in an array that I thought was pleasing and delineated them with white lines. I guess the judge at our last Creative competition thought they should not be in the MOMA (Museum of Modern Art).


COMMENTS:
 
Brian Swinyard This is a delightful collage Joan of rusted abstracts, each of which is a picture worth exploring in its own right. I love the arrangement within the overall frame and the range of colours and textures. I wondered whether the top two images in the first column on the left are too similar and needed to be physically separated or the colour of one of them changed in Photoshop.
Brian Duchin An abstract at its best.  Each image stands on its own.  Excellent creative image.  I wouldn’t change a thing.
Barrie Bieler This looks like the Andy Worhol of junked cars ! It works pretty well for me, suggest the white frame along the outer perimeter be a bit wider.
Rick Perkowski I don’t know if your image should be in the MOMA, but I would like to have it displayed in my living room.  I especially like panels two, three, and four in row three.  Red is the common color throughout most of the panels giving the image cohesiveness.  Some might say that the image lacks a center of interest, but I feel that the panels give the viewer a reason to linger and appreciate the image.  Very creative.  Very well done.
Anne Swearman

I must plead ignorance, as I do not know what MOMA is! Maybe a gallery??
The colours are great, and I like the unusual abstract patterns. Wondered about the possibilities of reducing the saturation of cyans so that the bright colours had a little less competition? 
Afterthought, does the last two letters MA stand for modern art?

Tim Koverman I like the composite of rust on old paint.
   


Member Bio

Joan Field - Biography

Joan Field and her husband, George, lived in New Jersey for 26 years before moving to CA, George’s home state, in 1989. They spent four + years in Danville (near San Francisco) and another four years in the Los Angeles (Orange County) area, when in 1997 they returned to Danville. Joan has been a member of various camera clubs since 1984 when she purchased her first 35 mm camera. The Contra Costa Camera Club her current affiliation, but she has also been a member of the ACES (Anaheim Camera Enthusiasts Club) in Orange County, CA and the West Essex Camera Club in New Jersey. Joan has been a member of several slide circuits since 1985 and is also administrator of the PD Digital Imaging Circuit #4. PSA has published her Digital Imaging Recorded Lecture. Her photography is very eclectic. Today her primary interest is in photomanipulation using Photoshop, printing, and putting music to short image shows, using a digital projector. Joan says, "if you haven’t done this, try it, it’s fun!"

Her digital camera is the just purchased Nikon D300. She uses a Mac G5, iPhoto, BR3, and PS CS3 and has recently purchased an Intel based PowerBook Pro.




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