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Study
Group 18 |
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| Laurie Thompson | This
is a very pretty photo of a very
pretty young woman. I do question the "Altered Reality" definition as
it applies here. |
| Warren Davis | Vacation |
| Phillipa Frederiksen | The
light has a really warm and feminine
glow to it. Simplify has given her an ethereal feel. It might be good
if you could smooth out her neck a bit more. The glow looks rather like
the glow of an open fire…but perhaps she has one on the
Galaxy! |
| Anna Goodchild | The
very soft focus gives the image a very
delicate finish. I have not tried Topaz or the Gausian blur so I do not
know what it would have been like before. There is a sense of wonder in
the subject which draws the viewer in to the subject. The colour in the
composition ensures that your eye is drawn to all the elements
&
texture plays an important part in the composition. |
| Hillary Morin | Beautiful
lighting and soft colours. I find
her chest appears more 'painterly' as opposed
to her face. Perhaps that area could be worked on. Lovely photo. |
| Peter Rowley | The handling of the original of this
portrait is subtle and well done. The lighting and subject are
beautiful, and the filter adds an appropriate softness to enhance that.
I find the angular black of the bottom left a little distracting, if
appropiate part of the picture (being the attention of the eyes).
Perhaps the area tone could be changed to be a little textured or toned
to be obvious but fitting. |
| Ruth Rittichier | |
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Biography
I
started photography with my parents' Kodak Brownie and used KODAK 616
film, when I was in high school. My girlfriend and I would process our
negatives, and make contact prints in her parents' bathroom. |
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