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August Image
Title -
Concessione
How I did it -
This was taken on a busy
touristy street in Italy. Used PS to crop, darken the lower
left corner, add a border and use the stylized filter for
added texture.
COMMENTS:
| Mark Aksoy |
Another eye-catching image with an interesting
color scheme! I think that without the filter it would
have appeared too busy. By highlighting object edges, the
filter brought order to the scene. I'm not sure darkening the lower
left corner helped, since it appears (at least on my monitor) as a
shadowy void that throws the image off-balance. I would
lighten it back a little here. |
| Cliff Banks |
As you said in your description this is a busy Italian
street scene. I find it a little too busy with difficulty
finding a place to rest the eye. |
| Bob Altman |
I love the filter you used on this. My only question
is why you darkened the lower left of the image? I would have used a
crop to try to cut down some of the color. Also, the image is not
straight. |
| Bob Barley |
Interesting image. We did not see the original image,
of course, so it begs the question, “What did it look like without
the filter?” I think there are a lot of interesting shapes and
colors in the scene and I don’t know if the filter improved the
image or not. Cropping this image was difficult due to the bright
and dark contrasts, and the filter didn’t have the same impact in
the darker areas. Tough shot to post-process. |
| Rene Ross |
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| Margaret Boike |
Nice treatment. I like all the colors and nice clear
"Ice Cream" sign. Then, you see the vendor standing there.
Cute! It might help to do something to the people in the background
behind the vendor - maybe blur them or darken them a bit - to make
the vendor stand out more? |
| Rich Krebs |
I like it. May be too busy? Not sure why you darkened
the left corner. |
| Member Bio |
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Rene Ross - Biography
ikudbne1@aol.com
Though technically I am
new, I feel like I have been a member of PSA my entire life...
for as far back as I can remember, my father (Walter Ross a +40
year member) took me along with him to all his camera club
outings and meetings; I liked looking at the pictures! When I
was old enough to hold a camera and reach the "on" button on the
enlarger, I started entering club competitions; even beat pop out
a time or two ;) I have been to a few of the yearly PSA
conventions in various parts of the country, going on various
photo excursions and taking a few of the composition/style
classes.
About 10 years ago, I moved from Chicago to
So.Cal. Unfortunately, with that move I lost access to
pop's Nikons and darkroom! And as it tends to do, life
invariably intercedes and my development as a professional
Registered Nurse in a Neonatal Intensive Care took over much of
my extra time. Photography got pushed into the background.
When digital started to become commonplace, I
was able to get back into the 'darkroom' and began taking
pictures for reasons other than mere vacation documentation. I
started looking at people, objects and landscapes again as I did
as a child, with wonder and awe and the need to capture those
perfect moments on 'film'. While computers are a favorite
pastime of mine, I know there is a great deal more I can learn,
so I decided it was time to jump back into the PSA realm... this
time with my own camera in hand.
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