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Study Group 7 |
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| Elaine Icklan |
Although the background shows its location, a little more blur would bring more attention to this dynamic image. The rust color is a bright red. I'd consider other tones that are less intense but more rust-like. Very well done. |
| Barbara Mallon |
The car treatment is effective. The background is too busy an full of eye traps. I would darken it and the back window. |
| Tony Tam | The background darker can made the major object stand out. One minor comment is that around front part of the car the grass is lighter than the other. This looks not reality. This might be the selection not accurate enough. |
| Carolyn Schlueter |
Oh what a treat!! Love your
capture and everything you have done to create this wonderful
image! It rocks ... just like this magnificent Olds used to. Love the way you've saturated this once beautiful old car to bring out all these great colors and changed the roof of the shed behind the car. The only things that are slightly distracting are 1) the pile of rusty pipes or what have you immediately to the right of the car. If you tone those down (especially the one right alongside the car) that will definitely keep our eyes on the car and 2) the old storage tank or whatever it is at the back of the car on the left side. If you tone down the brightness in that, that will also keep a judge looking at the star of the show. It's also cool that part of the windshield glass is missing. If you wanted to 'play' a little bit you might try using an Artistic Filter/Poster Edges Filter so see if it pops more to your liking, but it is a great and exciting picture just as it is and tells a wonderful story (smile). |
| Adrienne Bergen | I am a major car person, old cars, new cars, fun cars, whatever. I love this image. I love what you were able to do with the software to turn a humdrum image into a dramatic piece. I could look at this image for a long time and still find something new. I am off to shoot New England porches and doors this week and I hope I can treat the image as well in my software edits. Thank you for inspiring me to go beyond my photographs to increase impact without creating graphic art. |
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Tom McCreary |
The car was interesting to start with, but your adjustments really make it great. The colors are really good. Thank goodness that Topaz filters are relatively inexpensive, because my wife purchased Adjust after seeing this image! |
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