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July Image - Taos
Oven
How I did it -
My favorite shot from Taos.
I had to use HDR to reduce the contrast and clean it up a little with
the Clone tool. And then, of course, darken the edges a bit. Later
I installed CS5 and tried Bill's suggestion - here are the results.

COMMENTS:
| Jerry Appel |
I can see the interest in the subject, but the composition,
I think, has its problems. For one, the bright blue of the screen
frame, and the red hanging, are attention getters and compete with
the oven which you mean to be the center of interest. The oven,
itself, has its problems from the angle it is photographed, mainly
in the black space in the center which becomes, basically, the center
of interest. The exposure and color are pretty nice – maybe a somewhat
different angle….. |
| Bill Buchanan |
I like the idea of using HDR to control the contrast.
It's not necessary to get the grunge HDR look. What bothers me in
this image is the bright door on the left side. I may have moved
to the left to eliminate the door and create a view from the stepped
side of the oven. It may also be possible to use CS5 Content Aware
Fill to eliminate the door. It's worth a try. |
| Guy Davies |
It’s a great shot from Taos, and it has your style
written all over it. The compositional elements of the curves of
the oven and the rectangular windows, door and beam all come together
and are complemented by the red and green colour contrasts with
the yellow/brown of the rest of the scene. The focal point of the
oven is the dark hole in the centre, and the whole structure reminds
one of the shape of an armchair.
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| Karen Kotner |
The HDR is a wonderful tool here as the exposure throughout
the image appears to be very good. The image has beautiful soft
earth tones punctuated with the orange in the peppers and the bright
turquoise around the window that add pop. And the texture of the
structures add interest as well. The juxtaposition of the various
shapes in the image add interest. Is the Oven a working structure?
{ed. note: I think not} |
| Erik Rosengren |
--Welcome back Joe. Your photographic eye continues
to inspire. This shot was taken from the perfect angle. Notice the
hanging peppers do not merge with the door or window. The oven stairway
makes for a strong leading line and the colors and saturation appear
perfect. |
| Rafal
Kowalkowski |
Nice composition and colors of particular elements |
| Member Bio |
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Joe Hearst - Biography
I've been a photographer for about 60 years, but until about
ten years ago I was shooting mostly record shots. I gave slides
shows of my travels to friends at work, and showed a slide program
on the Sierra every two weeks at John Muir's home. Everyone told
me how wonderful my pictures were. Then my wife persuaded me to
join a camera club and I soon realized how mediocre they were.
I submitted as many images as possible for critique by the judges,
and also sent pictures to the PSA Print of the Month (POM) contest
where I could get more critiques. I guess the critiques have improved
my photography because my work has been doing well at the camera
club level and at county fairs. I was given the APSA at the 2007
Conference in Tucson and the PPSA at the 2009 Conference in Yellowstone.
Articles of mine have been published in the 3/01, 11/02, 10/03,
6/04, 5/05, 1/06, 7/06, 1/07, 5/07, 3/08 8/08, 4/09, issues of
PSA Journal, and two portfolios in the British magazine Digital
Photo Art. Judges have been kind enough to select three of my
images as PPD Print of the Month. I'm a member of the Contra
Costa and
Livermore Valley Camera Clubs, and am past President of the
Northern California Council of Camera
Clubs, and am now Chair of the Yerba
Buena Chapter of PSA. . I'm also Director of the
PSA Picture of the Month competition. I can be reached at
joe @ jhearst.com(remove gaps before using) and my web site is
jhearst.typepad.com
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