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| Bill Buchanan | I like the natural lighting of this portrait. The background is soft and diffused and the composition is nicely handled. Here is a case where I would like to have seen a before image to appreciate the Photoshop work necessary in creating such a dynamic image. |
| Joe Hearst | Well you certainly did a good job making it look like flat lighting. I might have put a bit more contrast in the face, but OTOH the way you have it makes him look impassive indeed. |
| Guy Davies |
I’m full of admiration for folks like you who can
produce pictures like this from just going walk-about in the street.
This is a superb study of this gentleman both technically and aesthetically.
It is sharp and well exposed, and your photoshop work is very well
done. The lighting on the face is subdued and brings out all the
details. You have also caught his character very well and I like
especially the cigarette just hanging casually in his fingers. I
do feel though, that the bright piece of silvery-white clothing
just below his chin looks too much like the blade of a knife, and
I would be inclined to tone it down quite a lot. I think a spot
of lightening to the left and darkening to the right of his face
(as we look at it) would be quite nice– see thumbnail |
| Rex Morey | An interesting portrait. The brightest thing in the
portrait of the face is the word on his hat, where my eye lands
and I then temporarily read the word, distracting me from your subject.
Words in photographs that are not contributing should be removed.
Otherwise a good rendition, except for the sunlight on his jacket
near his ear lobe. |
| Erik Rosengren | An interesting offering Jerry. To me, the facial expression is projecting "things are not good and I accept my plight. You give new meaning too "no pain, no gain" with your expertise and patience in PS as a means to reach the end product. Good job. |
| Alex Lane | This is the type of Image that I really enjoy. It is very well done - good color and composition and is also sharp. The background seems to go well with this man. If anything, a little smoke drifting up from the cigarette would have added some interest ( like take a puff and the 'pose' the same way)! |
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Jerry Appel - Biography
I have been involved with photography for more years (45) than I care to contemplate, over the past several years moving actively into digital imaging. My work has had some pretty decent exposure -- appearing in solo and group exhibits within the United States and abroad, in travel advertisements, in various photographic yearbooks and in four books of which I have been either author or co-author. The most recent is "Far Away Faces -- A Guide to Better Travel Portraits" (1998). I have been awarded a number of medals in the Austrian Super Circuit Competitions over the past few years, two during year 2001. At this time, my images are carried by four galleries in the New York area. All are invited to visit my website to see other examples of what I do. My email is gappel6 at optonline.net |
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