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| Neal R Thompson MD |
It is not clear that the man has a drum. The colors are contrasty. The subjects of the fountain and the man seem unrelated and would be confusing without the explanation. |
| Dennis Hirning, PPSA | It appears that you have combined the two images well. You might try using the Highlight-Shadow adjustment on the drummer to see if could balance the lighting. You might also try a little vignette to keep the viewer's eye on your subject. |
| Maria Drumm |
When I first saw the image, I thought the man was in the boat. Good job of repositioning. The drummer appears a bit too blue on my screen. I would neutralize the color |
| Timothy D. Morton | First I hope the resort works, and feel the sprit of the drums and the pool looks so powerful I would actual like to take a swim but think it's a long way just for a swim, and thus the colours are very moving. |
| Sol Blechman | If you mean you put the image of the drummer in the scene with the fountain, you did a good technical job of that. The stop action of his hand adds lot but I wish to see a bit more of the drum to help identify what he's doing. |
| Shahron Williams von Rooij | Looks like you cropped off a bit of the top of his head, although the fact that he’s bald makes it less distressing;) Nice event shot. |
| Member Bio | |
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Member 7 -
Biography
Photography is my
hobby together with music form the backbone of my life.
For living
I studied Mechanical power engineering and hold several positions.
Now I am
the GM of a British textiles company working in Egypt.
My Passion to photography started at the age of 12 when my father got me the first box camera. With this camera and a black and white film I won my first contest from school for a Pharaonic wall drawing. The hobby
evolved and I kept adding equipments eventually I build up a complete processing
and printing lab for BW pictures. Until the arrival of the color technology,
then I joined the lab of my uncle who was a pioneer in this technology at
Egypt.
Live
responsibilities took me on and off from photography. Now I work with the Nikon
F80 and struggling to process and scan films at home. In addition I work with
Nikon D80 and I am navigating in the sea of digital photography.
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